As discussed, this is great material that fits the brand messages and values. You are currently working on several issues: 1. The bottle is empty and has another brand name 2. You may try it a little larger and to the left 3. Consider how to place the slogan as its position does not work yet.
You are working thoughtfully on the portfolio as a whole but this advertisement has edits that still need to be made, which you were doing in class. We have also discussed using another of the Moldiv templates for Aquaviva. If you have access to a tablet, download the free app and experiment. Otherwise, you'll have to book a lunchtime or break time appointment with me in media.
As discussed, this is great material that fits the brand messages and values. You are currently working on several issues:
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2. You may try it a little larger and to the left
3. Consider how to place the slogan as its position does not work yet.
You are working thoughtfully on the portfolio as a whole but this advertisement has edits that still need to be made, which you were doing in class. We have also discussed using another of the Moldiv templates for Aquaviva. If you have access to a tablet, download the free app and experiment. Otherwise, you'll have to book a lunchtime or break time appointment with me in media.
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